I particularly like this addition:
grass failed to remain non-sentient, and so forth
It really fits the flavor of the mythology --Laveaux 15:34, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
This sounds a little like the various Native American philosophies. What were your influences?
Will 17:50, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
It actually mostly came from traditional western mystical philosophy (like spiritual alchemy, Francis Bacon and Victorian Rosicrucian thought) but put into "simplistic" mythological language. Some of it was just made up. --Laveaux 18:45, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
I see that now. Cool.
Will 03:37, 16 July 2007 (UTC)